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Wednesday, 13 April 2016

My place

My place 
The old tractor pulls the heavy load.
The shiny aluminium boat whizzed at the speed of light.
The warm house looks after us for the forever going night.
The salty water surrounds me like the solar  system.
The towering, snowy mountains guard over  us protecting us.
Generous, local people float around with compliments.

By Charlie.

2 comments:

  1. "The salty water surrounds me like the solar system." This line gives a real sense of how much water there was! Kiri

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  2. Nice writing Charlie your special place sounds amazing I like how you said generous local people float around with compliments. Keep up the good writing.

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